Drowning Lessons

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  1. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.

    This is my new fic. I'm co-writing My Way Home Is Through You, and I hope you like this one.


    I crept into my best friend's room, and ran and flopped onto the bed. He went flying, his eyes popping open, with a surprised look on his face. Bob Bryar, my best friend, was staying with me and my family for awhile. His parents didn't approve of a lot that he did, including him being in a band, but that's what he wanted to do. They decided to go to Europe for awhile, not knowing when they'd be coming back.

    All of a sudden, Bob tackled me, and began to tickle me. I couldn't stop laughing, but through my giggles, i managed to say, "Shh. Nobody else is awake... yet." He stopped tickling me.
    "What time is it?" he demanded.
    "Like... 4... in the morning," I mumbled.
    "WHAT?" He yelled. I shushed him again, "What?" He whispered.
    "Well, I had a bad dream..." I said, pouting, "And i couldnt get back to sleep."
    "Bella!" He said, then he sighed, "Fine. You can sleep in here with me."
    I smiled. I pulled back the covers and lay down, saying, "Thank you Bobby." I sighed, and rolled over so I was facing him.
    "What's on your mind, Bella?" He asked.
    "I dont know. I like having you stay here, it's like having a big brother," I said.
    "Yeah. I like staying here too. Your parents are the best," He said. I elbowed him. "But I love being here with you too."
    I smiled again. We talked a little bit longer, until soon enough, I curled up into his chest and fell asleep.

    *Bob's P.O.V.*
    Her breathing slowly turned long and deep, and I could tell she was asleep. She had curled herself up beside me, and her face was buried in my neck. I breathed in the sweet scent of her hair, and closed my eyes.

    I'm in love with her. I've been in love with her since the two of us were 9 years old.

    I put my arms around her, and pulled her close to me. I fell asleep with Bella Covington, the love of my life, in my arms.
  2. rawrx1394

    rawrx1394 Guest

    I call #1 fan spot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  3. Miranda

    Miranda Guest

    yay!!!! omg i love it!!!
  4. rawrx1394

    rawrx1394 Guest

    oh, and i say UPDATE.

  5. Katelyn

    Katelyn New Member

    awsome begining. I want more... now... please?
  6. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.

    ehh... later. i only have not even half of chapter 5. i want to finish that first.
  7. Alexxis

    Alexxis New Member

    -new reader-

    I LOVE IT.
    a bob story! :wub:

    update soon, please. <33
  8. breakaway787

    breakaway787 New Member

    yay! bob has a fanfic!
    soo awesome :]
    i really really like it. keep it up!
  9. rawrx1394

    rawrx1394 Guest

    xx vampire blood (3:52:37 PM): people like my story
    frankierolove x3 (3:53:19 PM): duh.
    xx vampire blood (3:53:45 PM): im surprised... im like... really bad. my writing sucks.
    frankierolove x3 (3:53:56 PM): nuh uh
    xx vampire blood (3:53:58 PM): yuh huh
    frankierolove x3 (3:54:27 PM): FUCK OFF, ITS GOOD

    *riots, and gets people to chant ''what the frank''*

    update bay bay.
  10. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.

    Okay... I'll make a deal with you all, get me three more readers, and I will update as soon as I can.
  11. !*Myncina*!

    !*Myncina*! Guest


    UPDATE!!! :clap:
  12. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.

    okay... yay! thank you very much for reading. even though there is hardly anything. I will update tomorrow for sure.
  13. rawrx1394

    rawrx1394 Guest

    *dances for new reader !*myncina*! and hands cookies to all readers*
  14. potato_cake

    potato_cake New Member


    I like this alot so far.

  15. rawrx1394

    rawrx1394 Guest

    vee said she's updating when she gets home!
  16. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.

    kayy. updating... NOW! well... its gonna be up in a couple minutes, or seconds... i dont know.
  17. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.


    *Bella's P.O.V.*

    I woke up, with a pair of arms encircling me. I opened my eyes to see
    who it was. Bob. For a second, I couldn't think of how i got there.
    Then I remembered. I carefully moved his arms and got out of bed and
    stretched. I placed a soft kiss on his cheek before leaving, then
    straightened the blankets over him.

    As he turned over in bed, I heard him mutter, "Hmm... sausage balls."
    I giggled a little, and left the room.

    I slipped in and out of the shower, got dressed, and applied my makeup
    before Bob woke up. I was brushing my teeth when he came in, wearing
    his boxers and a t-shirt, his hair sticking up funny. I was giving him
    a full makeover today, so he could have 'the emo look' as the preps at
    school called it. We were meeting a bunch of his friends at the mall.

    I spit and said, "So... sausage balls, eh?"
    He looked at me strangely, "Huh?"
    "I got up to get ready this morning, and you said that in your sleep."
    I said, giggling at the memory.
    He gave me that strange look again, as i walked out of the bathroom

    I went downstairs, to find two plates of pancakes on the kitchen table,
    and a note.
    Went to store. Be back later.
    Love, Mom

    I heated up one of the plates, and sat down to eat, flipping on the

    I had just taked a bite of pancake, when the doorbell rang. I went to
    answer it, opening the door to see a gorgeous guy, with hazel eyes and
    longish-black hair.

    "Umm... Hi." I said, blushing a little.
    He smiled, "Hi. I'm Gerard. Is Bob here?"
    "He's in the shower, i think," I said, smiling back, "Come in though. I
    was just watching t.v."
    "Cool. You know, Bob never mentioned he had such a pretty sister." He
    said, slightly running his fingers through me thick black hair.
    I could barely breathe. "He's not my brother." I managed.
    He quickly withdrew his hand, "Boyfriend? I shook my head. "Well, you
    are very pretty." He said, looking deep in my eyes, as if he was
    reading my soul, "I love your eyes. Such an icy blue."
    "Thanks." was all i could say. I was breathless again. I had such a
    strong urge to kiss him, yet I didn't even know him. I took his hand
    and led him back to the kitchen, where Bob was sitting eating my
    pancakes. I dropped Gerard's hand and yelled. "THOSE WERE MY

    Bob turned around with a guilty look on his face, which quickly turned
    to surprise, when he saw Gerard.
    "Hey man. What's up?" Gerard said.
    "Mppff. Nth. Hnn ffmm." He said, his mouth still full of pancake.
    "Come again?" Gerard said with an amused look on his face. I giggled.
    Bob swallowed, "Nothing really. I'm meeting Mikey, Frank and Ray at
    the mall in a little bit."
    Gerard's beautiful face turned sour at the mention of Frank's name.
    "Frank's coming?" he asked bitterly.
    I was looking back and forth so much, it was like watching ping-pong.

  18. Chinook.//.

    Chinook.//. New Member

    ooooo thats all i can say...
  19. potato_cake

    potato_cake New Member

    Aweseome update!

    I'd be speachless too if Gerard came to my door asking for Bob
  20. Dumbledore

    Dumbledore glass child.

    :] you'll love the next few updates i hope. they made me smile, and im the one writing them. :]
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