Discussion in 'Completed Fan Fictions' started by Schuyler, Mar 2, 2007.
sure..... wait grr i'm not gonna be here tomorrow! :'(
i'll read it thursday night.
okay..... that works for me...
*wishes i could go* :'(
there's a chance i could get tickets.
but nothing more than that.
a chance is good **nods head**
there's no chance for me..... :'(
im new!!!!!! soooo UPDATE!
new reader! *does new reader dance!* :lol: YES! WOOOHO! I'm first!
sky! you need to update!!!
GAHH! IM GONNA WIN THIS TIME!!!! *does new reader dance*
YESSS!!!!!! i won!!
awww. i thought i won.
or maybe we tied....
no way! i won!
SKY COME ON UPDATEEEE!!!!!!!
K so here's chapter 35, which I already posted.
But it was over a month ago, so it's just to refresh your memory. xD
As I walked downtown, I noticed Gerard's favorite bakery. I only had five dollars with me... but if it was for Gerard, it was worth it. I walked into the bakery and picked out a chocolate cupcake with blue frosting; he's bought it once before. I had it put in a box, and went back out onto the street.
As soon as I thoguht I was getting out of the area with no trouble, I heard a loud crash coming from the alley behind me. I stopped and waited for another crash that would signal me to run. But instead, I heard voices. Familiar voices. And that only drew me closer.
"What are you doing? Get away from me!" The first voice said.
"Now why would I do that, when I went to all the trouble to get you here?"
"Look, what's done is done! It was so long ago. Can't you just forget about it?"
"I've heard that somewhere before."
I heard a scream, and another crash.
"Sarah will never forgive you!"
I gasped when I heard my name.
"You just worry about yourself." The second voice breathed, followed by ominous laughter, which turned into a scream. Then there were more crashes, and crying. I was afraid to look around the corner. All of a sudden, I saw a stream of blood flow out from the alley beside my feet. I quickly thrusted my body into the dark alley, and screamed.
k here you go, sorry guys. xD
Chapter 36 (finally. xD)
"Frank!" I screamed, looking at Frank leaned against the dumpster with a dark red bruise on his forehead, and a bloody nose. But it wasn't until I saw Gerard laying on the ground with a pool of blood surrounding his head, trailing all the way down the dark alley, that I dropped the gifts and ran to the scene.
"Frank!" I screamed, again. "What did you do to him?!"
"What did I do to him?!" He shouted. "Gerard tracked me down. Gerard tricked me into coming here, and Gerard beat me up. I really don't think it's fair for me to get all the blame for this, just because he's your boyfr-"
"Stop! I don't care!" I said, frantically. I looked down at Gerard. His two black eyes were closed, his nose bleeding, and his head cracked open. I brushed the stray hairs off of his forehead and kissed his cheek. "Gerard, can you hear me?" I yelled. He didn't answer. I looked at Frank. "Do you have your cell phone?"
"I think it fell out of my pocket right over there." He said, pointing to a random spot. I widened my angry eyes at him, indicating that I wanted him to go get it. He obeyed. "Call 9-1-1!" I shouted after him. He looked back and nodded.
"Gerard, what has gotten into you." I said quietly, tears streaming down my cheeks.
Three minutes later, the ambulance was there. Gerard - and Frank - were put on stretchers and brought into the back of the truck. I looked at Gerard's beautiful, pale face one last time before getting into the front of the ambulance and riding to the hospital.
Woot...An update...Tis good...promise you won't wait that longer to update again >.<
Haha I won't wait that long again, don't worry.
The only reason I waited that long in the first place was because the great debates were starting, which took up basically all of my time and effort.
THEN after school let out, I had my other story.
And then I lost the next chapter to this story. xD
I might just post chapter 37 today, too. Because I feel bad. xD
yes next time DONT update 100 pages later,
'cuz i had to look for it!
[didn't find it, though and was laughing at some pretty good old times...]
I found it. xD
You got caught up in all the "JESY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!" posts.
yes and the 'i want ___ I want ____" Posts, i found the one where I called bert, and the one where I called frank, and called jade, and called jeph, but now all i have it jeph.... :] .. :[ ... :] and i found the party posts! D
Well Kayla called Frank a while back.
Okay so anyway, I'm in an update posting mood.
Should I update this story, or 'Saints Protect Her Now'?
thats so sad!!!
i hope gerards okay!!!!!
i think ive read "saints protect her now" but i cant remember what its about coz i've read so many fan fics lol
post a update 2 this. i'd love 2 find out what happens!
i hope gerards okay!!!
and i wonder if frank was telling the truth that gerard brought him there or if it was the other way round...?
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