Discussion in 'Completed Fan Fictions' started by Lexi, Jan 26, 2008.
Aww, no I love this fic.
I'm looking forward to the last update though.
It was daybreak when Mikey finally stretched his weary hands over his head and yawned, finally deciding to get some long overdue rest. He carefully put aside the many newspapers from around the world he'd been sitting through the previous night. As usual, nothing turned up in the papers that gave away any clue to their location.
He was tired. He made his way to the kitchen and pulled out a can of cold coffee and a slice of chocolate cake.
It was funny how nothing changed much in the past hundred years. You'd think there would be flying cars and robots to bend our will, but no. The only thing improved so far was that they finally found a way to reduce air pollution, and only by .67892 percent.
Humanity was coming to a standstill.
Mikey was afraid that he too was coming to a standstill. Julia had nagged him time and again to let them go, but no.
Not when he needed her the most.
How long had it been since he'd last uttered her name?
Mikey couldn't remember.
He didn't want to.
It was too painful.
It was his fault, Mikey had decided long ago.
He had taken her away from him.
And he was suppose to be Mikey's brother.
Well, he'd severed that bond a long time ago when he decided to just up and leave, taking Louisa with him.
And he was going to pay.
Lexi wanted me to post it for her. Now, here it is. The last chapter.
I'm not gonna lie, I am super sad this fic is over...:glare:<3
But! I hope you keep writing, your super talented. Can't wait for more (I hope!)
Sequel much? xD Jk, but it certainly sets it up for one.
That was a great final chapter! :] I hope you find the time to keep writing some more stuff Lexi, because I really enjoy your writing.
I really, really enjoyed this fic. It was/is one of my favourites
it's over :'(
this fic was awesome
i sure hope there is a sequel
i can't believe it's over
i loved it
Like the others said I really loved this fic and I too am sad that it's over. I do hope you continue writing because you have a knack of getting out certain emotion especially humor. Besides you killed Hannah Montana so you rock!!!
It's over. :'(
I hope there's a sequel.
It was amazing!
please say there will be a sequel
i loved this fic
I really hope there will be a sequel, there is certainly a set up for one.
I loved it Lexi, you are such a fantastic writer.
NOO!! WE NEVER FOUND OUT WHAT HAPPENED TO FRANK! :'(
Oh wells...I hope there will be a sequal
I'm really sad this is over.
I loved it.
Whoa it's over?! It sounds like you left room for a sequel, Lexi...I hope you're going to do one!
I loved this story from the beginning, and am sad that it's over. But it was purely amazing, as are you.
And thank you
And people say I have a weird sense of humor.
Thank you, Angie <3
And there will be x]
Soon, I promise.
I just have to remember to bring the first few chapters of it the next time I'm lucky enough to go online.
Th-...There's...Going to..b-..be a SEQUAL! YAY!
I LOVE YOU! *hugs* Ah.. I seriously can't wait
i'm well happy now
ahh, I'M SORRY LEXI!!! I ONLY JUST CAUGHT UP!!!
GAH!!!! POOR MIKEY!!! HE WENT WEIRD!!!
i can't believe it finished!!!! :'(
glad there's a sequel though. this fic is fantastic!!!
eep, i'm at an utter loss of words. -_-'
Aha, thank you guys x]
I already have the first few chapters of the sequel made.
But it needs some tweaking.
Watch out for it :]
The title will be FEAR. (not in all caps, of course)
Aaaaaaand make way for a new lead character :]
We'll be focusing more on someone else (two of them, actually) instead of Gerard and Louisa.
Sure, they'll be in it, but they will no longer be the pivotal figures of the fic :]
Now I'm saying too much.
Love you guys <333
^Ah Lexi I can't wait for the sequel!
Same! I'm really excited for it!
YAY!!! ohmygod, i can't wait!!!
i'll make sure to keep an eye out for it!
erm, Lexi, just in case i miss it, could you please pm me when it's up?
if it's okay, that is.
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