Nightmare [One Shot]

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by PlanetaryGoGo, Mar 23, 2012.

  1. PlanetaryGoGo

    PlanetaryGoGo Media Division

    Title: Nightmare
    Rating: U
    Disclaimer: This story is fiction. Even though it's based on Avenged Sevenfolds song Nightmare, I have no contact with Avenged Sevenfold, Matt Shadows, Syn Gates, Zacky Vengeance, Johnny Christ or their creative minds.
    Main Characters: No named characters
    Summary: A character lost in its own nightmare
    Genre: Nightmare, mystery, darkness


    You should’ve known…

    I should’ve known. I knew that now. But for whatever reason I didn’t when it started…

    The price of evil…

    I cursed that stuff after a while. It made me feel good for a while. But in the end I knew it wasn’t going to help me.

    And it hurts to know that you belong here…

    And now I belonged into this insane place where they told me when to wake up, when to showerm when to eat and when to take my meds. And I hated it.

    No one to call…

    And what made it even worse was the fact that I had no one to call even. All my friends thought I was crazy, that I’d gone insane after all the things I did to myself.

    Everybody to fear…

    And what made it worse… The one time they had cometo see me I was absolutely scared, terrified. It didn’t make sense.

    Your tragic fate is looking so clear…

    The doctor’s said my fate was sealed, that I didn’t have much time. They never told me though. One I had a visitor. He was dressed in black, his face pale and calm. He held out his hand. And I put mine in his.

    It’s your f**king…

    He took me away. Away from the pain,the confusion, the loss of my own mind. He took me into the darkness…..

  2. Asthma_Turtle

    Asthma_Turtle Active Member

  3. BlessedWithACurse

    BlessedWithACurse New Member

    I liked this, was very good.

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