My writing.

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by CyanideDiamond, Jan 25, 2013.

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    This is where I'll post my writing; whether it be show writing, poems, song lyrics, short stories - basically writing in general.​



    Writing Index:
    -Bambi Eyes, page one
    -A Girl Named Rose, page one
    -Not Happy, Just Satisfied, page one
    -Ode To Infinity, page one
    -Fog, page one
    -You Don't Have To Smile, He'll Do It For You, page one


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    Bambi Eyes


    It was midnight when you came around
    and tried to help me off the ground
    but something else had held me down
    and I couldn't make a sound


    You stared at me with your Bambi eyes
    your delicate tears had made me cry
    and clicked in me deep inside
    something that had my stomach tied


    The moon was glowing bright, so bright
    and its sharp light scared off my fright
    my throat was closed, oh so tight
    something about the night just felt so right


    You sat down and stayed with me
    though I blatantly disagreed
    but still you didn't flee
    you said "I won't leave until you're free"


    Your words had brought more tears
    I hadn't felt like this in years
    suddenly it was clear, so clear
    that you had helped my fear disappear


    The moon was glowing bright, so bright
    and its sharp light scared off my fright
    my throat was closed, oh so tight
    something about the night just felt so right


    Soon it was nearing one
    and I began to miss the sun
    but something helped me not to run
    it was your Bambi eyes that had my heart undone


    A small smile played on your soft lips
    the same lips I wanted to kiss
    I don't know how I did resist
    for kissing you would have been pure bliss


    The moon was glowing bright, so bright
    and its sharp light scared off my fright
    my throat was closed, oh so tight
    something about the night just felt so right


    The grip on me was coming loose
    didn't feel as much like abuse
    that famous smile of yours was now in use
    my heart fluttered and I had no excuse


    At half past four I was almost there
    I can't believe that you did care
    to spend your night with me you'd dare
    though for you it wasn't really fair


    The moon was glowing bright, so bright
    and its sharp light scared off my fright
    my throat was closed, oh so tight
    something about the night just felt so right


    Finally, I was free
    and you were with me
    why you were, I can't see
    but that does not matter; you were with me!


    It was midnight when you came around
    and tried to help me off the ground
    something else had held me down
    this time, though, I made a sound
     
  2. Miz Erie

    Miz Erie Black Mariah Staff Member

    That was great! Well done!
     
  3. Thank you. :]

    ***


    A Girl Named Rose


    With your cheeks stained red
    and your eyes glued to the floor
    helpless words are racing through my head
    yet I show you to the door.


    Time stops once you leave
    and to me that only shows
    that one of us was deceit
    and that's the girl named Rose.


    I lay in self pity and sorrow
    and I wonder if you're happy
    there'll be no "see you tomorrows"
    does the guilt mean I'm still sappy?


    Dear Miss Rose,
    you've done the unacceptable
    and though I'd love to let you go
    the idea is not digestible.


    Your smile has scarred my heart
    and your beauty has blinded me to others
    you know I've loved you from the start
    and I'm unable to love another.


    So I forgive you and your soft blue eyes
    love has filled me from my head to my toes
    I'm willing to forget all your lies
    because I love you, little Miss Rose.
     
  4. Not Happy, Just Satisfied


    I don't need your comfort
    I've got my loneliness to drown in
    this half-empty flask to keep me warm
    and soothe the aching hole where me heart should be


    Just my mind and I
    left alone against the world
    unlike most friendly cowards
    with their heads stuck in the clouds


    When it rains, it pours
    and when it stops, it starts again
    there's only so much I can do
    before it's useless to count to ten


    My inspiration's dead
    so down went my motivation
    my imagination's left my head
    and my life is an endless living nightmare​
     
  5. Ode To Infinity


    O infinity
    may your numbers
    never halt
    and shall you carry on
    your lovely way
    with no stop or assault


    O infinity
    may you run onward
    for forever
    and last until
    the last of days
    but still have not a never


    O infinity
    your greatness
    frightens plenty
    yet the way you have
    no beginning nor end
    leaves no mind empty


    O infinity
    keep on
    your merry way
    may you continue 'till
    all living creatures
    stop seeing the light of day
     
  6. Fog


    sometime, along the line
    the fog faded from the glass
    the grass is greener than green
    and the sky is blue at last


    but speaking softly is too loud
    a feather can knock me down
    any lights are far too bright
    and my happiness wears a frown


    I've recognized the beauty
    of seeing life for what it really is
    but sometimes a little fog is needed
    to keep your sanity where it is
     
  7. You Don't Have To Smile, He'll Do It For You


    As you wonder where if came from
    And you choke on empty words
    Its bloody claws snake upon your tongue
    And seek to take you from this world


    You notice it never really leaves
    Just hides in the dark sometimes
    Your sanity is what it wants to steal
    Though it's been long since you've truly felt alive


    You manage not to anger it
    But as you glance upon its face
    You grow more disgusted by the minute
    And through you open mouth, it takes your place


    It replaces your frown with a cheeky smirk
    For now it will not sleep under your bed, but on it
    And soon, in just a little while
    You'll be in that hell-hole of a fiery pit
     

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