Discussion in 'Completed Fan Fictions' started by LivingDead, Sep 6, 2007.
lol You're funny.
you made me cry x[.
Thats sad....more soon....pwese
But I've kept coming back
Which must mean it's good.
HOW THE HELL DID I MISS ALL THESE FREAKING UPDATES!?!?!?!? RARRRRRRHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[/end enraged screaming]
and please update soon! I can't believe shes back with her parents!! noooo!! I'm glad gerard stoped being an a-hole and came to his senses, but im so afraid miss bliss (miss witch) is gonna come outside. ack!
oh the craziness!
i love this story! keep up the good work....it makes me cry, i hope it all gets betta and everyone gets happier
I'm kinda addicted.
â€œStop.â€ He said pulling away.
â€œNo, I canâ€™t. I canâ€™t do this, sugar please-â€
â€œWait, you were the one who just kissed me. Gerard make up your mind, please.â€
â€œI know, I know I kissed you, I felt like I had to-â€
â€œWHAT!?â€ I shouted, he covered my mouth with his hand.
â€œNot that I had too butâ€¦Veronica, you knew from the beginning, baby this wasnâ€™t going to last. We both, deep down, knew it even though we tried so hard to deny it. That night, when I went to dinner, I didnâ€™t want too because I knew it would rekindle what Liz and I had. But part of me was curious and when you told me you didnâ€™t want me going, it made me want to go even more. I wanted to prove to you that I could go to dinner with her and nothing would happen but I canâ€™t prove it, if anything youâ€™ve won out of all of this.â€
My jaw dropped, â€œI won!? How did I win Gerard? I lost the person I love; I lost the court case that couldâ€™ve changed my life. I have to go back to my abusive parents, no one believes me I-â€
â€œWait, you love me?â€ I nervously chewed on my nails, he grabbed my hand; removing it from my mouth, and held it in his. â€œYou love me?â€ He asked again. I began crying, I did, I had from the beginning.
â€œI love you.â€ I repeated, my body crashed against his. He tilted my chin up so our eyes would meet,
â€œVeronica, I canâ€™t love you.â€
I was actually running, in a full sprint, away from him. I was flying down the stairs, his voice fading into the cold air of the outside. He canâ€™t love me? What does he mean he canâ€™t love me? I wiped my eyes, eyeliner smudge on my hoodieâ€™s sleeve. How could he not loveâ€¦wait, whereâ€™s Frank? My thought process totally changed, did he move out when I did? I pulled my phone from my pocket, of course in my pathetic attempt to win Gerard back I couldnâ€™t forget my cell phone. I dialed his house; I prayed his mom would answer with a sigh and a yawn. Then Iâ€™d apologize for waking her up and ask to talk to Frank and she would bring it to him and Iâ€™d hear him sigh and yawn.
â€œHello?â€ sigh and yawn,
â€œHi Mrs. Iero is Frank there?â€
â€œNo Iâ€™m afraid heâ€™s not sweetie, he hasnâ€™t been home since theâ€¦well earlier today. Did you try Alliâ€™s?â€
â€œOh no, ok thank you Mrs. Iero, sorry to wake you.â€
â€œItâ€™s okay sweetheart.â€ I hung up and dialed Alliâ€™s,
â€œAlli, oh, sorry, Alliâ€™s mom? Yeah, ok is she there? Alli, yes your daughter, this is Veronica. Can I just talk to her please itâ€™s an emergency. Ok thank you.â€ I heard another sigh and yawn.
â€œHello?â€ Alli asked groggily.
â€œAlli, is Frank with you?â€
â€œNo, I havenâ€™t seen him the rest of the day. I thought he was with you, he is isnâ€™t he?â€ Her voice instantly changed to the tone of worry.
â€œNo, thatâ€™s why Iâ€™m calling. I called his mom, heâ€™s not there, and I donâ€™t-.â€ My brain decided to kick in, â€œI know where he is, Alli Iâ€™ll call you back later.â€ She yawned and said ok before hanging up.
Like I said before, I had always wanted to walk around Jersey at night but it was almost midnight now and weâ€™re not in the safest of the Jersey neighborhoods. Fortunately I knew where Frank was and it wasnâ€™t too far. I walked past the tree that we carved our names into when we were 5; we carved hearts next to them because we believed one day weâ€™d get marriedâ€¦ha. I walked past the spot where Frank took his first drunken piss on a piece of public property and the first spot where I ever kissed Frankâ€¦how memorable.
â€œFrankie?â€ I called. I saw a shadow move, but I wasnâ€™t sure if it was him. â€œIf youâ€™re Frank Iero then who is this?â€
â€œGet your butt over here V.â€ He sassed, I smiled. My eyes adjusted to the darkness and I was able to see him better, again the newly emotional Frankâ€¦crying.
â€œBabe donâ€™t cry.â€ I said wrapping my arms around him.
â€œHow can I not? Youâ€™re leaving, youâ€™re all I have.â€
â€œYou have Alli.â€ He huffed, like one of those smart-butt, yeah-right kind of huffs.
â€œWhat?â€ I asked.
â€œSheâ€™sâ€¦sheâ€™s not how she was before all of this, that day I met her, everythingâ€™s changing and I donâ€™t like it.â€ He rested his head on my shoulder; I played with the hairs on his neck.
âFrank, one day we were gonna leave Jersey anyway, Iâ€™m just getting a head start.â€
â€œWell I donâ€™t want you to have a head start; I want us to have the same start. I want us to stay being us, Veronica and Frank, itâ€™s how it should be. I love you, Iâ€™m the only one who can show you this much love, donâ€™t forget that.â€
Last Bit of relationship ruining in me I hope
Can I please kick him in the face?
He was supposed to say he loved her baaack.
It made me kind of sad,
But it was a lovely update, Jordie.
well, i'm glad it's out of ur system now. great update!
Yes you are completely allowed to kick him in the face!
It's supposed to be Gerard and Veronica, no matter how wrong it is! >_<
But...I sense a Frank/Veronica thing coming on for some odd reason.
Wonderful update. <3
I hope so! but you never know...
Frank and V sounds fun!
that's ok. butthole Gerard made his appearance finally. i'm content.
Gerard is a big stupidhead.
But yay for Frank!:clap:
Yes he did.
Glad you like it.
is it strange that i actually like him as the bad guy in ur stories?
stupid gerard. ew he's retarded lol.
but when frank said 'i love you' did he mean it in a friend way or a romantic way? i interpreted it as romantic but im not sure.
No because I do too! He always has a little nice side too, and is always sweet and romantic at times, in my opinion.
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