Katty's Poetry

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by crescendo., Mar 29, 2011.

  1. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Thanks Emily,
    I was glad that I was able to convey that.
     
  2. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    This is dedicated to my Grandmother. She died March 10, 2005
    Also to Emily, he recent chapter on "Gnashing Teeth" inspired me to write this. Emily, think of this as my comment to you. Because thinking about someone dying, is to hard for me to bear. Especially since I was so close to my grandma, and ever since the funeral I haven't had the courage to go to her grave.

    Goodbye
    I wish I could forget you
    As I look towards the empty chair
    I wish I didn't feel so empty
    Just a feeling of despair
    I just can't forget you
    You caused me so much pain
    It was unintentional
    Unavoidable
    I pack your stuff away

    I wish I could talk to you once more
    I held your hand as you left
    ...without saying goodbye
    I couldn't see you after that
    The feelings masked for so long
    I cannot face them

    There is some good in these twisted events
    You are reunited with your long lost love
    I know you will watch over me
    I know just that much
     
  3. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    Oh God, Kat. That was beautiful, and meant a lot. I know how you feel, and I'm sorry for your loss.
     
  4. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Thanks Emily -hugs-
    I'm sorry for yours as well
     
  5. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    And You Don't Care
    Life is never as it seems as you walk away from me
    Once that happens, nothing is the same
    Technically you said forever, but now the ball is rolling
    ...and you don't care

    Nothing matters to you any more
    It matters to me though
    ...and you don't care

    What makes me not matter
    What makes you break your promises
    I cry myself to sleep, wishing that you were close
    ...and you don't care

    Never talk to me again you little witch
    Your excuses have no bearing any more on me
    Just be quiet because I can't stand to listen to your crying
    Because now you care
     
  6. Moonlight.

    Moonlight. Member

    thought-provoking. And it kind of sounds like one of your fanfics. (kind of)
     
  7. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Suicidal Beauty Thanks to Miz Erie for the title
    Staring out at the black tar
    A meaningless chunk of land – to some
    But to you it's where your great last misery will stand
    The knife is heavy in your hand
    Your life is a great target practice
    It's has no mind or meaning

    The cool blade touches lightly onto your pale skin
    Your head falls back to look at the dark night sky
    .... Your last vision of this world
    The stars twinkling at you
    As if not want to say goodbye

    A shooting star flies by
    Like it's waving goodbye
    Clouds cover them and two raindrops land on your face
    You dig the blade into your skin
    The warm crimson blood leaks out
    The rain patters on your face, harder and faster
    The sky is crying for you

    You reach the carotid artery and dig the tip of the blade in
    The blood spurts out and you clench your teeth
    .... The real pain has started
    You close your eyes as you let yourself be consumed into darkness
    For the first time in years a smile appears
    You are finally at peace
    .... For yourself at least.
     
  8. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    The sky is crying for you
    I adore this line. Great imagery, love.
     
  9. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Thanks dear :$:
     
  10. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Your Love Condemn Me

    Different style for me, I wanted to try something.
    Kudos to Emily for the title
    ---
    Nothing shows you that I am insane. Nothing shows you that I am weak. But after going down that winding path... I finally crack. My mentality breaks and you are taken down with me. Our love is the only binding thing that will have any hope of keeping us together.
    The strength of our love breaks as you cannot understand the taunts that are thrown at you. I cry every time you say goodbye and replay it ever day in my head. It has complete hold over my already fragile state and I disappear, never to emerge again.
     
  11. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    "Your Love Condemns Me"?
    either way, I like it (=
     
  12. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Hmmm... I like that. Thanks dear.
     
  13. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    Sure thing <3
     
  14. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    [untitled]
    Talking to you, is like talking to a brick wall
    You never listen, not at all
    I never want to hear you again
    All your worries all your sins
    It's like making peace with an enemy
    Not that you think you have any
    Well... guess again
     
  15. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    Oooh I quite like that one (':
     
  16. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Thanks :$:
     
  17. Moonlight.

    Moonlight. Member

    Ooh... more poetry! *intrigued*
    That last one looks good (as ever).
    Yay!
     
  18. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    [untitled]
    It's like you don't know me anymore
    As I lie cold and broken in your embrace
    Drawing the last breath from the air
    Knowing that there can be no more despair
    Slipping away from everything
    The clock in ticking once again
    Counting down the minutes until life ends
     
  19. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    Reminds me a bit of Three Days Grace's "Time of Dying", without the optimism. I like it, though :]
     
  20. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Awe thanks ... I think
    Is the non optimism a good thing?
     

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