Katty's Poetry

Discussion in 'Creative Writing' started by crescendo., Mar 29, 2011.

  1. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Not Truly Alive (Yet, Not Dead)

    The knife in my hand
    The gun to my head
    The rope around my neck

    Slowly flowing down
    I seethe - unable to speak

    Gun powder on my fingers
    A bullet in my hand
    Unable to speak

    My neck breaks
    My breath stops

    It's all a dream
    As I suffocate from standing alone
    Unable to stand alone
    Unable to be alone

    It dissolves into reality
    Tears flowing down my face
    Dripping off my chin
    A cry ripping through my lips
    I am alive
    But on the inside
    I am dead

    quick fyi: I wrote this when I was extremely depressed and I usually write dark poetry anyway, I probably shouldn't have started with this poem, because of how I wrote it, but -shrugs-
  2. WhySoSerious?

    WhySoSerious? Active Member

    Whoa this is depressing Kat. Why did you write this? This is an awful way to feel.
  3. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    in that one moment

    it takes just one moment to make it welcome
    to change a life
    a tiny action no one has to know about
    something like screaming out
    or getting help
    as I lay here on the ground
    lifeless and cold
    begging for help
    that seems as if it's never going to come
    Until you held out your hand
    and picked me up off the ground
    with a smile on you face
    it wasn't needed
    it was welcome
    it revived my viewpoint on life
    and liberty
    it helped me live another day
    another week
    the outlook was what was needed
    and that's what the smile offered
  4. Live4LyricsCM

    Live4LyricsCM New Member

    Wow Kitty Kat, these are really good. I the phrases you use, you should write more! :)
  5. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    :$: thanks


    Deceiving with our games
    Waking becoming a shame
    Into the silence of darkness
    we hear
    we see
    we speak
    no evil

    Close your eye to keep the picture
    Cover your ears to keep the silence
    Bite your lip so you don't shout
    It's sad that dreams are not realities
    But beautiful that nightmares aren't failures

    Just sink under the covers little one
    and rest your peaceful eyes
    The sun has gone to bed
    and will be out when you arise
  6. WhySoSerious?

    WhySoSerious? Active Member

    Why are you so good at this?
  7. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    :$: I don't know... I just write
  8. WhySoSerious?

    WhySoSerious? Active Member

    Well you're really good
  9. Moonlight.

    Moonlight. Member

    Hey, they're as good written as spoken!
    (Makes me wish I wrote more poetry)
  10. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Nothing, No one

    taking a breath
    nothing to breathe
    or plunder
    an empty ellipse of hope
    making a change
    and taking the blame
    wandering aimlessly - to the beyond

    taking the change
    to hope
    no more
    as you analyze
    nothing else
    no one else
    because that non-existent breath
    in the empty ellipse
    empty abyss
    in empty
    there is nothing
    no one
    you are gone... faded
  11. Moonlight.

    Moonlight. Member

    :shock: Yep. That totally blows me out of the water.
  12. ...beautiful sissy
    i love it
    more , kit kat???
  13. BrittMCR

    BrittMCR Active Member

    These are incredible!
  14. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    You Say That You Love Me
    You touch me and I melt into you
    You look at me and I can't look away
    You make my heart beat fast without even trying
    You make it hard for me to say no
    You hold me in yours arms so tight
    You say you love me and will never let me go
    You call me just to tell me goodnight
    You hold my heart in you hands
    You tell me we need a break
    You tell me that I am free
    You say you will explain later
    You say that you still love me
    I say that I love you too
    I find myself without words
    I find my unable to speak
    I'm confused
    I thought I was all you wanted
    I mean that's what you told me​
    What did I do wrong?​
    You broke me down
    You hurt me and now you don't even care
    What exactly was I to you?
  15. that could so easily be a song,
    its beautiful
    i really need to work on not procrastinating
    i am demanding
  16. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    ^ You know I just wrote that off the top of my head, because my girlfriend just called me and broke up with me... ;'(
  17. awww, honey *huggles*
    i havent met her, but if she broke up with you, she's pretty thick headed to not seeing how amazing you are, sissy
  18. crescendo.

    crescendo. il mio amore

    Awe thanks sissy -huggles back-
    I was so confused because everything seemed fine between us.

    Broken, run down, and confused
    I gave you everything that I could
    Left out in the dark
    You took everything that I had
    You left me all alone
    Enclosed in a tomb
    I weep
    You turn your head away
    Ignoring my cries for you
    While I'm locked in this casket
    Without you
  19. i really wish there was a nother word to describe this stuff other than just beautiful , but i cant because it is
    (well then shes just a undeserving witch. you deserve better, dont ever start regretting anything about yourself. it all happens fora reason tats my philosiphy)
  20. Dust Angel

    Dust Angel Unloveable. Staff Member

    Aww, Kat. She doesn't deserve you, love.
    The poems were so raw; I could sense what you are/were going through ]:

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