I've always had a weak spot for when Gerard talks about dying in Monroeville while Frank will get out. It's just such a worry that you'd rather not deal with it while you can. They haven't really talked about it in a serious way and as a mainsubject in their conversation so I guess that's a sign of them not wanting to deal with a problem that they know will be hard to fix. Over all, great as always. I'd also like to tell you that while writing this story, from the beginning to now, you've imrpoved a lot and this work is so far awesome. You've been writing this story for what, 4-3 years? I'm really curious for how it's going to turn out because it seems that there will always be something that catches up and needs to be solved before you can finish it. Like Bob's problems at home and the fact that he's an uncle, Ray's background, Sarah working hard for her freaks and Don, Franks past life with school and Jamia(like seriously) and ofcourse, Gee's whole life. There are so many stories to tell and they're all so original, that's why this story is amazing.