Are you a 'songwriter'?

Discussion in 'Musician's Corner' started by Adrenaline Devil, Oct 31, 2008.

  1. Technically, all lyrics are copyrighted once you put them down in lead-sheet from. So, if you have your lyrics either recorded or written, they belong to you.

    Anyways, this thread is to share lyrics, tab, videos of yourself, whatever. Be a musician and spread it around! :)

    I was on it
    I was off it
    Just one more c’mon, just one
    I was in it
    Not to win it
    An even score and not any more
    And around again
    You thought it was a something
    This one thing
    A nothing
    You thought it all out to make a fate escape
    In itself
    You’re a perfect help
    Another way to create it all erase

    Just give me another
    Just give me another one
    Just give me another
    Just give me another one

    You’ve gone out
    You fell out
    To the side of the sky and in the sun
    Just one shout
    Cars turnabout
    These walls are colorful I swore
    That sound again
    You thought you’re in a rope
    We can cope
    Just hope
    You made your life like a videotape
    This door
    Make it something more
    Your way of putting it out of place

    Give yourself another
    Give yourself another one
    Give yourself another
    Give yourself another one

    Just 'cause you're still here


    I have better ones, I just don't feel like typing them up right now... :D
     
  2. savedbymcr15

    savedbymcr15 New Member

    First of all, I really likes yours :) I'll type up some of my lyrics later...I'm also big into playing the bass guitar and piano...and I'm learning guitar :p
     
  3. Bass!
    One of the best instruments, ever.
    It's so... deep sounding and wonderful!
     
  4. Xaviare

    Xaviare New Member

    Hell no...I write ~*~*~MAGIC~*~*~=p

    Had to post this...

    Song 1
    I call it "Sacrohexi" xD

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    Let it bleed and end your day
    Pass the torch and watch me fade away(away)
    Rain falls to mark my death
    The silence stomped the heart to death now
    Do you fear me now?
    It's that time
    You'll end up lost
    You're not the one I need
    There's no turning,back for you
    Give your soul to me...
    [mini solo]
    When the sun peaks towards the moon
    Where will I be?
    When all comes down
    Where will I be?Who will I see?
    All hope was left with you
    Who do you see?Who do you see?

    Nothing revolves around you
    Who do you see?Who do you see?
    Look in my eyes
    This is not me
    Who do you see?What will I be?

    Song 2

    YouTube - All souls Down

    All Souls Down

    Verse1:
    It's here
    Damn the clouds you see
    Drips away my soul...
    When cerebellums crush
    Grim becomes the world
    and we become the key
    Put your soul down
    Put your soul down

    Chorus:
    Souls Down,Souls down

    Verse 2:
    Meet me at Desert's Point
    and you'll see(see)
    what it did to me
    Sacrifice you soul to me
    All souls down

    [chorus]

    Breakdown:
    What it did to me
    Lay it down
     
  5. Damn.

    "When cerebellums crush
    Grim becomes the world
    and we become the key"

    I really like that part, a lot!

    Sicky

    I tried to drown my evil ways
    I tried to hook it so I can’t complain
    Brought it to fall down with a blaze
    My little dolly could entertain
    Good rule not to look me in the face
    You’ll give me nothing to erase
    My friends all disappear without a trace
    I’m tied to the heart of the refrain

    I can’t see
    They cut holes
    I can’t see
    They cut holes
    I can’t see
    They cut holes
    I can’t

    This is all my delusion out of place
    I slipped unthinking into shame
    My blue veins are made of lace
    Think my god has taken aim
    Never say it all just ends this way
    You just can’t see that’s too cliché
    I feel your mechanic evil glaze
    Where were you when I became misplaced

    I can’t see
    They cut holes
    I can’t see
    They cut holes
    I can’t see
    They cut holes
    I can’t

    Devil’s sleeping, Devil’s dreaming, Devil’s waking up and screaming
    Devil’s sleeping, Devil’s dreaming, Devil’s waking up and screaming
    Devil’s sleeping, Devil’s dreaming, Devil’s waking up and screaming
    Where were you
     
  6. ...this is hardly anything but I like it so...

    Tell me does the light grow when you close your eyes
    And are you holding on?
    Bloodshot, strained wide open
    don't look, don't look, you won't stop
    Bleeding for a love you lost
    You're trying to pay and we both know the cost
    Of life


    ...I had more but I can't be bothered looking for it now xD
    ...I actually LOVE this... wow :]
     
  7. Xaviare

    Xaviare New Member

    YouTube - tonight

    Tonight's a deathwish,Tomorrow's a never

    Behind closed eyes I watch over you
    Falling for you
    Stuck to your mind
    Take the time and see
    I'm here for you
    Tonight,Tonight
    Darkness awaits me
    Fallen pieces lurk towards you
    Falling for you
    Death in sky
    Rain fall over me
    Tonight
    Wishing that you fell for me
    Wish away the pain
    Death illuminates the air
    And all I see is rain
    With you
    Tonight
    Darkness take me away
    With you
    It blackened the air you walk on
    Shotgun shells in my mind
    Blow away the truth
    And there you'll be
    It has to be you...
    But tonight it's me
    Tonight,Goodnight
     
  8. MySecretSanctuary

    MySecretSanctuary New Member

    First: Love the songs! :p
    And second: Ah, I'll post something ^^ But its a poem I wrote while I was in Dallas yesterday- I have it written down but I'm still learning Piano and Guitar so I don't have it put to music- its actually quite optimistic compared to my actual songs, but then again, I write about whats actually going on in this world, Only one so far is about fantasy, its about Vampires, pretty much XD- I'll post a song and a Poem :p, heres the poem:

    Title:
    "Sora (Sky)"

    Poem:
    "Get Up And Fly
    You'll Hit The Sky
    Don't Worry About What You Can't See
    These Eyes Are Only Set For Thee
    The Sky Is Your Only Destination
    The Rest Is Only A Undesirable Temptation
    Without A Forgotten Expectation

    The Lies That Others Believe
    Is The Truth That You Receive
    But As You Look Into The Dark Night
    You Become Ready To Take Flight
    And The Days That You Come To Regret
    Are Reset When You've Payed Your Dept
    And Soon After That, They Are A Forgotten Memory Set"

    Theres the poem I wrote ^^ I had no internet up there so I came up with the rhymes myself XD

    And heres the song:

    Title:
    "Paper Hearts"

    Song:
    "V-1:
    They said, you’re not gonna be alone
    We know there’s something more to hold
    Living life eternally, nothing will separate us
    Keep on believing that there’s more to life

    Crying, but loving you more
    Breathless with one simple score
    Will we believe in something more?
    Or stay alone forevermore

    Chorus:
    Broken paper hearts, stapled to the floor
    Colored with paint, there’s nothing anymore
    Will we learn to believe? Will we die alone?
    They comfort us, than forget us
    Breaking our paper hearts some more

    V-2:
    Roses Bloom in the Winter Sky
    Dancing softly in the wind
    Wondering what it’s like to feel
    As they’re watching our pain

    We cry, feeling our pain worse than most
    They pay attention, but they ignore us still
    Watching and misjudging, going with their own life's
    Still ignore our paper hearts and cries for help

    Chorus:
    Broken paper hearts, stapled to the floor
    Colored with paint, there’s nothing anymore
    Will we learn to believe? Will we die alone?
    They comfort us, than forget us
    Breaking our paper hearts some more

    Ending:
    Our life is a lie
    We want something more
    Our paper hearts are still bleeding
    Dying here alone
    Wishing they would bleed like us
    Wishing they would know what it’s like to cry"

    ^^ There they areeeee!!! If you wanna know what their meanings are, just ask XD
     
  9. I feel empty
    Help me find myself
    Am I with you?
    Or am I lost?
    I'm falling
    You see me tumble down
    Will you pull me up?
    Or is this my last call?
    I left my heart in your arms
    Remember me
    And I won't die
    I'll forever cry your name

    ...I need to work on it ><'
     

  10. Love this! I'd try finding scales for guitar online or try Uncle Tim's Book of Scales, it's really easy. Try reading tab if you can't read Standard Musical Notation (I had that problem, and I still struggle with SMN). Good for piano, too, as it's all in SMN! :)


    I think it's great the way it is!
     
  11. 'Eat It'

    I believe these are unholy markings
    I believe these are unholy markings
    I believe these are unholy markings
    I believe these are unholy markings

    Whoa... yeah!

    We’re marching to the beat
    Of a cold and lonely hum
    Underneath the dancing feet
    Our shadows, they have gone
    Send a memo to my maker
    I’m leaving here for good
    I’m tired of just one big sky
    And all the things I have never, ever understood

    I took refuge with the darkness
    Come catch me if you can
    You are breeding with the heartless
    Giving them the helping hand
    Can’t you see they will dispose you?
    Stake you out for the people
    They are planning this behind your back
    And you will never keep what you want for here

    Look at yourself
    Are you a tool?
    Are they persuading you?
    To always keep your cool
    Can you look down?
    At where you step
    You are feeling confident
    Because our minds are in the depths

    I believe these are unholy markings
    I believe these are unholy markings
    I believe these are unholy markings
    I believe these are unholy markings
     
  12. aseretsperry

    aseretsperry Member

    Um, shall I revive this thread?
    well i've been writing lyrics for hrmmm... three years? sounds about right.
    first off, sugar.psychotic

    you're lyrics are.... wow. Awesomee!! :D

    Okay. So i think this is one my few good ones, heeh. be gentile with me D:

    Introduction to the insanity

    The scraping and the screaming
    You can’t bear
    You start pulling the roots and strands
    Of your hair

    Chorus: You hear the voices
    They sing a song
    That’s oh so welcoming
    Welcoming us along

    Your brain flops and flips
    In an upbeat insanity
    Your happy with your comfort
    Comfortable with your happiness

    Chorus

    Bring on the pain
    Bring on the glory
    Step up to the rhythm
    That keeps you propped up

    Chorus
    Chorus

    Cut the chords
    Cut the strings
    Cut all things
    We’re finally free
     
  13. Vega

    Vega Cosmonaut

    Yeah, I kinda write.
     
  14. ZeroToHero

    ZeroToHero Guest

    Yes, yes I am.
     
  15. Claire.

    Claire. Photographic Disorder.

    I write lyrics and music for my band.
    Nothing very profound though, I must admit xD

    Hellectra - Nothing Better Than


    Keep your fingers on the wheel babe
    Keep them there so that I can let go
    Keep your eyes onto the road darling
    Keep your eyes there and we’ll have it good this time!

    Nothing better than running down the highway
    Got my eye on the speed limit and I feel high
    These chicks just want have a good time
    Nothing better than….

    Take off those heels honey
    Take them off so I can dance for you
    Take off that hat honey
    Take it off so that I can look at you!

    Nothing better than running down the highway
    Got my eye on the speed limit and I feel high
    These chicks just want have a good time
    Nothing better than….


    And so on XD

    A bad recording of it here (just an extract really):
    HELLECTRA Promo video. - YouTube

    And well, various other songs I wrote all go on about the same things more or less.
     

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