Ash's One Shots - Page 3 - The Black Parade

Memory_Faded · 05-11-2008, 03:56 AM

That was sad.

But yet another great one-shot.

**Lokeriel** · 05-12-2008, 02:24 AM

thanks for all the lovely comments, expecially Teresa and Isabella!
it really makes my day to see that you've enjoyed the little things that my brain comes up with!
Sorry to say, there will be no story today.
my brain is kinda fried and i've not been able to think of something for a one-shot today!
just to remind you, i anyone has requests for one-hots, i'd love to see them!
just post a comment, PM or IM me with either a couple keywords, or a phrase or line that you want in the story.
thanks again guys!
<33

RachelS · 05-12-2008, 06:47 AM

Ash, these Oneshots are amazing!

I know I've said this on Bleeding Words before, but you are so, so talented. Your writing is fantastic.

I like how you write a variety of stories; like not just happy, you write some sad, some happy and some angry etc.

Another when you can

Elena · 05-12-2008, 07:53 AM

Aww, that was so sad, but so beautifully written. You are so very, very talented. I can't stress this enough. Great job. =)

Memory_Faded · 05-12-2008, 09:13 AM

Aww.

That's okay. Give your brain a rest, I'm sure some more amazing ideas will come to you from it. And considering nobody has made a request yet, I will.
Lyrics from a song I love. I'd love to see what you could do with these, if you want;

No need to put this on me,
You are the one and only thing I need,
Trust in me,
I'll show you things you've never seen

"The New Year" by The Getaway Plan

Whether it's inspired by this, or actually has it in it. Either way, I think it would turn out good. Only if you want.

(L)

**Lokeriel** · 05-12-2008, 09:53 PM

Teresa, I already have an idea for that!
I just want to know, do you have a preference on who's in it?
and thanks for all the comments, guys!
i love seeing them!
<33

Memory_Faded · 05-13-2008, 03:39 AM

Oh, yay!
Ummm, right now I'm thinking Frank...
Yeah, probably Frank, or Gerard.
Thats who I can see in it.
(L)

I can't wait to see how it goes!
Awesome.

Issabbella · 05-13-2008, 08:25 AM

*Pushes people away* GIVE THE BRAIN A REST!!!! *blows whistle at boy who got too close* BACK IT UP BUDDY there will be no distractions for her pretty little brain, <3 Issabbella

**Lokeriel** · 05-13-2008, 08:36 PM

Shame
Ray Toro POV
Rated: 12

I woke up with a killer headache. I could hear loud clanging, which I guessed was coming from the small kitchen area of our tour bus. I rolled onto my side and pressed my pillow over my ears, trying, unsuccessfully, to drown out the noice that was making the pounding in my head even worse. I stayed in my bunk for another twenty minutes before I decided that sleep was not coming back to me. With a groan, I left my bunk.

"Oh my god, it lives!" Cried Frank as I entered the kitchen area, determined to make the noise stop. Franks loud voice make it feel like there were icepicks in my temples. I stopped dead in my tracks and glared at him.

"One. More. Noise. You. Die." My brain was so fried I couldn't even form coherent sentences. Frank shrank back about five feet from me, and the rest of the guys laughed. I made my way to the coffee pot, and fixed my self a cup. I didn't even bother with the cream and sugar I usually added to my coffee. I killed the cup in about 2 minutes, and already started to feel a bit more human. The headache was reduced to a dull throb in the back of my skull.

"Damn, Ray! How much did you drink last night?" Gerard asked as he approached the coffee pot. "You're usually the most sober of us! I've never seen you this hungover."

"I don't know, man. I feel like I'm gonna die though." I replied with a small chuckle.

"Don't die, Ray!" Mikey laughed.

"Seroiusly, dude." Added Bob. "If we shame people for falling asleep with their shoes on, imagine what we'd do to you if you were dead!" This reduced Frank to the floor in a fit of giggles. Suddenly, a sense of dread came over me. I looked down at my feet, and sure enough, my shoes were still on. I abandoned my coffee mug on the counter and hurried to the bathroom.

"You bastards" I muttered under my breath as I looked in the mirror. My face was covered in random marker drawings. There were stars across my forehead. Something that appeared to be a penis was drawn on my right cheek. My entire nose was coloured black. "What the hell, you guys!" I shouted. Their only response was an eruption of laughter.

An early one today!
I'll be posting another before the day ends.
<33

Elena · 05-13-2008, 08:44 PM

Ray, Ray, Ray. Getting hungover...'tis not good.

But I laughed at the part at the end. x3 I believe that I once wrote 'homeless orphan' on my younger brother's face. It reminded me of that.

Great job, Ash! =)