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Old 01-26-2008, 06:15 PM   #1
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Rating: 15 (for language, etc.)

Main Characters: Gerard Way/OFC

Disclaimer:This story is the product of my over-active imagination. Therefore, it is entirely fictional and in no way are any of the characters related to / based on any person, living or dead.

Chapter Index:

Chapter 1-Page 1 Chapter 29-Page 27 Chapter 57-Page 88
Chapter 2-Page 1 Chapter 30-Page 29 Chapter 58-Page 89
Chapter 3-Page 1 Chapter 31-Page 30 Chapter 59-Page 90
Chapter 4-Page 2 Chapter 32-Page 30 Chapter 60-Page 92
Chapter 5-Page 2 Chapter 33-Page 31 Chapter 61-Page 94
Chapter 6-Page 3 Chapter 34-Page 33 Chapter 62-Page 95
Chapter 7-Page 4 Chapter 35-Page 34 Chapter 63-Page 97
Chapter 8-Page 4 Chapter 36-Page 36 Chapter 64-Page 98
Chapter 9-Page 5 Chapter 37-Page 36 Chapter 65-Page 99
Chapter 10-Page 5 Chapter 38-Page 37 Chapter 66-Page 101
Chapter 11-Page 6 Chapter 39-Page 39 Chapter 67-Page 102
Chapter 12-Page 7 Chapter 40-Page 41 Chapter 68-Page 103
Chapter 13-Page 7 Chapter 41-Page 44 Chapter 69-Page 104
Chapter 14-Page 8 Chapter 42-Page 44 Chapter 70-Page 107
Chapter 15-Page 9 Chapter 43-Page 47 Chapter 71-Page 108
Chapter 16-Page 10 Chapter 44-Page 49 Chapter 72-Page 109
Chapter 17-Page 10 Chapter 45-Page 53 Chapter 73-Page 109
Chapter 18-Page 11 Chapter 46-Page 53 Chapter 74-Page 111
Chapter 19-Page 13 Chapter 47-Page 54 Chapter 75-Page 111
Chapter 20-Page 13 Chapter 48-Page 57 Chapter 76-Page 113
Chapter 21-Page 14 Chapter 49-Page 59 Chapter 77-Page 114
Chapter 22-Page 16 Chapter 50-Page 62 Chapter 78-Page 115
Chapter 23-Page 18 Chapter 51-Page 63
Chapter 24-Page 19 Chapter 52-Page 65
Chapter 25-Page 20 Chapter 53-Page 69
Chapter 26-Page 21 Chapter 54-Page 72
Chapter 27-Page 22 Chapter 55-Page 74
Chapter 28-Page 25 Chapter 56-Page 84
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(500 years ago)

The chiming of the grandfather clock was the only sound heard in the living room.

Finally, the voice of Mary Alice, the owner of the house, reverberated around the room.

"To Donna," she said, while raising a goblet filled with crimson wine.

"To Donna," echoed around the room, and glasses were also raised.

Mary Alice looked around the room. Sitting on the sofa were a man and two women. The man had short dark hair, and his face was deathly pale. Everyone in the room was deathly pale.

"So that means HE's the oldest now." a young woman blurted out from across the room.

"I don't trust him." the man sitting on the couch commented darkly.

"What's not to trust?" a cold voice suddenly echoed around the room.
Everyone jumped, startled, and immediately looked around the room for the source of the voice.

A figure emerged from the shadows. He was pale as a ghost, and his hazel eyes took in every detail of the room.

He cast a malevolent eye towards the man on the couch. "Tell me, Anthony."

The man paled - if that was possible. "It is simply that, it's hard to trust a new leader after one just died."

"I'm sure Donna wanted him to be, Anthony." Mary Alice said.

After a tense moment of silence, the pale figure turned and disappeared.

"I hope this goes well," Anthony said, exhaling the breath he had been unconciously holding.


CHAPTER 1 (present)

*RIIIIIIIIIINNNNNGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*

"Damn it," Louisa cursed under her breath as she threw her books into her locker and raced down the hall for first period English.

She made it to her seat just as the teacher came inside the room, and breathed a sigh of relief.

"Hey," a voice next to her said.

She looked up and saw Frank, her best friend, smiling at her.
"Hi, Frankie,"

He ran his hand affectionately through her long brown hair.

"So how was your date with Jess?" she asked.

"Okay," he said in a bored voice.

"Don't you like her?"

"She's nice and all, but she's just not my type. Besides, she couldn't keep up with my awesome energy!" he said, smiling an ear-to-ear grin.

Louisa swatted him playfully on his butt.

"Mr. Iero and Ms. Jacobson, do you think you could keep your hands away from each other long enough to pay attention?" the teacher's irritating, scratchy voice said.

"Sure thing, Mr. Smith," Frank said. "It's just that I have a lot of sexual tension that needs release."

The girls in the classroom giggled and cast longing glances into Frank's direction, and envious looks into Louisa's.

Louisa rolled her eyes. Everyone thought that she and Frank were an on and off couple, but really, they were just friends. Friends who didn't mind getting intimate, but she'd never think of doing it with Frank.

After school Frank walked Louisa to her house.

"I'll call you later, sweetie," Frank murmured as he kissed her on the cheek.

"You better," Louisa smiled as Frank bounced jovially down the driveway and out of her sight.

She pushed open the door and went inside the house.

What she saw made her want to scream, cry, and throw up at the same time.
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Old 01-26-2008, 06:23 PM   #2
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I like it.
And that's saying something, because I only read one fic on this entire site. I hope to read more soon?
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It's pretty good.

I want to find out what she saw.
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Old 01-26-2008, 07:14 PM   #4
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Lovely! Really. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! This is awesome. :D
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I like it!
Update soon, yes? =]
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This sounds really interesting!

More soon? :]
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hey...it's me...jhai2...love it...reminds me of someone....who you really really know...lol...
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Jhai, that's quite an unusual username...
Is it a shortcut for what hurts the most?
Glad you like the fic
I kinda lost the draft I made for the fic , so I'm tearing the house apart looking for it... All I can say is that what Louisa saw will change her life.
Forever.
And ever.
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There were bodies in the living room.

One was her mother's, her body twisted into horrible angles, and her head cut off. The eyes of the decapitated head stared lifelessly at the ceiling.

A mass of blood and gore sat in the middle of the room. It would have been unrecognizable, were it not for the ring on a finger. The ring belonged to her sister.

Just as she felt like throwing up, she heard an anguished groan coming from the back of the sofa. She ran, and she found her father clutching his stomach.Blood oozed from where a wooden spike was impaled.

"Father," she whispered, unable to say anything more.

Her father looked up at her weakly. "I need to turn you, Louisa," he said, coughing out blood.

When Louisa was silent, he continued.

"I want our bloodline to continue, Louisa, you're my last hope. Please," he begged.
I think some family history would be useful at this point.

Louisa's parents are both vampires. Her younger sister is also a vampire because she wanted to be, so her father turned her. Louisa, on the other hand, wanted nothing to do with it, as she wanted to live as normal a life as possible.

Louisa knelt down near her father. "Okay," she said in a small voice.

She could see that this was a great relief to her dying father.

She let her neck rest against her father's dry mouth. As she felt his fangs sink into her flesh, she stared up the ceiling, and wondered how she would ever explain all this to Frank.

Then she wondered if she could even see Frank again.


CHAPTER 3

Mary Alice walked briskly along a dark hallway. The thick, bloodred carpet muffled her footsteps, but she knew that he could hear her approaching. Passing ancient portraits and statues, she came to a grand oak door at the very end of the hallway.

Before she could even knock, a cold voice said: "Come in."

She took a deep breath, and, on the exhale, opened the door to his study.

He sat behind a rosewood desk. There were numerous papers and official-looking documents atop the desk, but she could tell that his attention was on the picture frame on the right hand part of the desk.

He did not switch his attention from his mother's picture to Mary Alice.

"Yes?" he asked.

"3 vampires have been killed, sir," she replied in a shaky voice. It did not matter that she had been assisting him for 500 years. He still gave her the creeps.

He was silent.

"It was the Jacobson family, sir,"

At this, he looked up from the picture and contemplated Mary Alice through his cold eyes.

"The Jacobson vampires are gone then?" (You know, I don't really think that Jacobson and vampires go well together)

Mary Alice fidgeted nervously. "Uh, actually, sir, the father was able to turn his eldest daughter before he died,"

"So she is the last of them?"

"Yes, sir,"

"I want to see her. Now."

At this, Mary Alice was shocked. He had never entertained guests in his study. As far as she knew, she was the only person allowed to enter. But only with permission, of course.

"Well, Mary Alice?"

She was unaware that she had stayed silent for more than a minute.

"V-very well, sir," she said as she quickly walked out of his study.

500 years or not, Gerard Way still scared her.
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Please update! This story is dark, i like itt!
Especially the part with the dead bodies -evil grin-
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