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Old 01-08-2008, 03:48 PM   #1
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Default Staring straight at my heart [Frerard]

RATED: 18+ for sexual scenes and strong language.
DISCLAIMER: This fanfiction is entirely fictional. I do not have any contact with any of the band members whatsoever. All other characters that are not members of the band/their family are completely fictional from my own imagination.
PAIRING: Frank and Gerard


Never ever EVER wrote a fanfic before, whether it be for MCR are anything.
I know it sucks so far, I'm HOPING to make it a bit better.
Sorry for anything that doesn't make perfect sense, I was writing this at dinner trying to be quick before I had to go for my mock sats.
Anyway, I don't know if I'll write anymore, I do have a few ideas though.
Sorry again, first one remember.
From Frank's POV btw.

Part 1 - Page 1 - . - Part 2 - Page 1 - . - Part 3 - Page 1
Part 4 - Page 2 - . - Part 5 - Page 2 - . - Part 6 - Page 2
Part 7 - Page 3 - . - Part 8 - Page 3 - . - Part 9 - Page 3
Part 10 - Page 3- . -Part 11 - Page 4- . -Part 12 - Page 4
Part 13 - Page 4- . -Part 14 - Page 5- . -Part 15 - Page 5
Part 16 - Page 5- . -Part 17 - Page 6- . -Part 18 - Page 6
Part 19 - Page 6- . -Part 20 - Page 7- . -Part 21 - Page 7
Part 22 - Page 7- . -Part 23 - Page 8- . -Part 24 - Page 8
Part 25 - Page 8- . -Part 26 - Page 8- . -Part 27 - Page 9
Part 28 - Page 9- . -Part 29 - Page 10-.-Part 30 - Page 10
Part 31 - Page 10-.-Part 32 - Page 10-.-Part 32 - Page 11
Part 33 - Page 11-.-Part 34 - Page 11-.-Part 35 - Page 12
Part 36 - Page 12-.-Part 37 - Page 12-.-Part 38 - Page 12
Part 39 - Page 13-.-Part 40 - Page 13-.-Part 41 - Page 14
Part 42 - Page 14-.-Part 43 - Page 14-.-Part 44 - Page 15
Part 45 - Page 15-.-Part 46 - Page 16-.-Part 47 - Page 17
Part 48 - Page 17-.-Part 49 - Page 18-.-Part 50 - Page 19
Part 51 - Page 19-.-Part 52 - Page 20-.-Part 53 - Page 21
Part 54 - Page 21-.-Part 55 - Page 22-.-Part 56 - Page 23
Part 57 - Page 23-.-Part 58 - LAST PART - Page 23


Part 1:
As my eyes slowly glazed over him I wondered what was so mysterious. His eyes covered by his floppy black hair, his pale skin, his, his, well, him. He was... flawless.

When his eyes met mine he giggled, that laugh, it was, perfect, as perfect as he was.

I could feel my cheeks burning. I quickly put the shirt I'd been looking at down and headed for the shop exit. I didn't glance back, I wanted to.

Later;
The ball made a bang on the wall, I caught it and threw it again. Why didn't I stay? Why didn't I talk to him? That's why, I'm a coawrd.

As the ball bounced off the wall again, I heard the door bell.

'Mom!' I shouted. No reply, let me guess, went out shopping. Whoever it is can't be that important, if they are, I guess they'll call back later.

I threw the ball again, as hard as I could. Why am I so stupid?

The ball bounced again but I missed it. It went straight through were my hands had only just reached hitting me right in the centre of my head. Great, all I need, a red lump right in the middle of my head, don't I look bad enough?

I heard the bell again. That's it, don't they think I'm annoyed enough? I threw the ball across the other side of the room and stood dizzily on my feet.
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Old 01-08-2008, 04:44 PM   #2
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This is great ! :]
Update soon?
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Old 01-08-2008, 07:42 PM   #3
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WoW good start :D update soon!!
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wow this is good!
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CONTINUE CONTINUE CONTINUE!!!
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Hey, this is good! Please update! I give cookies!
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EEK. thankyou everyone I got bored of English revision so I tried writing a bit more.

Part 2:
The room began to spin around me causing me to clench my head. The room went black, darkness clung to every corner of the room. My legs gave way.

Later;
As I opened my eyes I could feel my whole body shake. Above me knelt a figure. I quickly sat up banging my head with theirs, they just laughed and said 'you dont want to make yourself unconcious again.'
He put his hands on my shoulders and pushed me back down, I didn't fight. He put my head on his legs again and pulled the coat covering me up to my neck. I didn't recognise the coat, it must of been his. I remembered where I was.
'How did you get in and why are you here?' I asked forgetting my manners and re gaining my hearing properly.
He laughed again. I instantly recognised that laugh. I opened my eyes fully and above me I could see a beautiful face, I gazed into his eyes. He suddenly remembered the question.

'Oh. You left your bag in the store' he spoke. 'It had your address inside and I run the bell but there was no reply, then I heard you shout for help. The door was unlocked. I'm Gerard Way by the way.' He spoke this all very fast.

Gerard, such a nice name, it fitted him perfectly.




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aww frankie knocked himself out ....great update
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Thankyou =D

Part 3 (kinda short cuz I split it in half):
He slowly placed his soft hands against my face. This was it. I closed my eyes. His lips slowly met mine sending shivers down my spine. What seemed like forever only lasted a few seconds before he quickly pulled away. He hurriedly pulled his soft knees from under me placing it with my bag. Grabbed his own bag and stood up.

'I shouldnt of done that' he spoke and rushed out the door before I could ever reply. The front door shut quietly behind him.

'But I wanted you to', I whispered.
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