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Old 01-11-2008, 03:11 PM   #21
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Sure you can shoot Tom. Just shoot his evil best friend for me too oh, and make sure it's slow and painful.

Thanks for commenting :D:D:D

You know. I actually have the next two parts written and typed :D
Too bad I have to go now. Not like anyone would care but ya'know.
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Old 01-11-2008, 03:14 PM   #22
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i CAre!!!
tell ya what i'll shoot tom + friend if u shoot my entire science class!!!

post updates when you want!!!
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Old 01-11-2008, 03:17 PM   #23
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^ How about you shoot my entire science class aswel. Then we have a deal. I moved places today and was made to sit between Tom and his mate who both hit me and skit me and stuff. In the end I got to move and the whole science class started making fun of me asking why was I special and could they move and stuff. Worst science lesson of my full life.
-gets guns ready-

Bleh, I'll post one now and the other after my dinner. :D

Part 7:
'Mikey! Calm d...' he stopped and looked at me.

'Gerard, stop standing there like a gork and help Frank get cleaned up.' He didn't argue.

He simply placed his arm where Mikey's was and started walking with me to the bathroom. I needed

something to say but the words jumbled in my head. I was going to mess this up again, I knew it. I could feel

the tears swell in my eyes.

'Im sorry' he whispered, suprising me.

Think of something smart to say Frank.

But you're not smart Frank. You're an idiot.

'It's okay' I replied.

Nice going Frank, dumbass.

'I'm such an idiot. It's not like someone like you could ever be...'

Don't be a coward all your life and tell him.

'I'm' I spoke.

This was it.

As if this would ever work.

I hated that voice. It had been in my head since auntie had died. I wanted it to just go away.

'gay' we seemed to whisper at the same time. He looked releaved.

'I've never told anyone that' I murmered, a tear sliding down my face.

Liar.

He stopped. His delicate fingers slowly touched my cheek wiping away the tear from my face.

'But your not just anyone' I spoke whilst his cold fingertips still rested on my cheek.

'Let's get you cleaned up' he said. Not the reaction I was hoping for but I could see the hint of happiness in

his eyes.

He put his arm back around me and led me into the bathroom I heard the door shut behind him and turned

around to see what he was doing. His eye's glistened in the light, it was the first time I'd ever got a look

properly into his eyes.

'What?' he questioned.

'I just realised how amazing your, er, nothing' I replied as his hands stroked the taps twisting so that water

poured out filling the sink.

He just giggled. That laugh drove me wild but I kept my hands firmly by my sides. I wasn't going to ruin this.

You know you'll ruin it, you always do.

He soaked the cloth in the soapy water and rinsed it out again and slowly. He started walking to where I was

stood and his body got closer to mine. His jeans brushed against my own but he didn't seem to notice.

He gently smoothed my face with the cloth removing the blood from my face and put it back into the soapy

water. The blood seeped from the cloth turning the water pink.

He just laughed again.

'What are you laughing at? Does it look that bad?' I questioned. My heart sunk. Why did he always see me

when I looked so bad?

You always look bad, Frankie boy.

'No, I was just thinking about how much cleaner you look' he said walking closer to me again.

'Too bad I have to ruin it' he whispered.

'Wha' I began to question confused but was stopped. His lips touched mine as he pushed me against the

tiled wall. I could feel the passion in his kiss and I tried to show it back. My arms reached behind him and

my fingertips reached the rim of his jeans.

'Gerard? Everything okay?' we heard Mikey shout hearing footsteps growing louder and closer. I moved my

head away from Gerard, I could tell in his eyes he was dissappointed but he understood.

He stepped away back to the sink just in time. Mikey flung the door open.

'Frank, want me to walk with you back to your house so you don't bump into that Tom again?' he questioned

me, his face full of joy. I wondered why he was so happy.

'Sorry Mikes. I told Frank he could watch 'The Nightmare before Christmas' and I'd walk with him home later'

Gerard answered for me before I even had chance to think of a reply.

'Okay, well, I'm going back to Lila's for the night. So I'll see you tomorrow. Kays?' his eyes were stuff full of

joy.

I didn't want to know what they were going to do.

'Fine by me' Gerard replied.

'Sure your going to be okay?' Mikey asked again. Gerard nodded then screamed 'just go!'.

Mikey took the hint and bounded back down the stairs. We heard the door quietly close behind them.

The house fell silent.
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Old 01-11-2008, 03:23 PM   #24
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lets just shoot everone

yay tnbc...love it!
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Old 01-11-2008, 07:16 PM   #25
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=0 I think you just unleashed your evil plan ~

And because I'm sooooo boredddddd

Part 8:
The film finished and Gerard streched.

'Why didnt you wake me dumbass?!' he suddenly said laughing.

'Aww, you looked so peaceful' I taunted.

'Any wonder?' he asked gesturing to my neck where his head had been.

'Now I can tell' I laughed moving my hand to my neck pretending to be in pain.

He reached for the cushion and hit me with it. I wasn't standing for that. I stood up and picked the cushion I'd been sat up swinging it at him.

We ended up in a full pillow war using the couch as our defence, knocking everything in sight over on the way.

'Victory is' I started to shout swinging one last time at Gerard who was sat on the couch. He moved quickly causing me to lose my balance. I fell on the sofa on my front and my legs swung in the air. Gerard tripped over me landing on top.

'Mine!' he shouted as we both burst into fits of laughter on the couch. Gerard stayed on top of me.

'Now, what's my prize?' he asked showing a huge smile. He looked so hot.

'Get off me and I might just show you!' My fingers moved up and down his body tickeling his every inch. He jumped up squeeling and laughing then stopped and crossed his arms. I showed my hugest victory smile and went to the door.

'You'll have to catch it first!' I more shouted than spoke and flung the door open running down the dark hall.
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Awwwwh! yay!!!!

Lubbbbbs It!!!!!
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Old 01-12-2008, 12:36 PM   #27
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Awww...It makes me laff...LoVES it
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Aww, I can't help but have all the bad stuff happening to Frankie. It can only get better, right? Lol.
Thanks for the commentssss.
I wasn't going to write anymore but for some strange reason Dana begged me, so.....


Part 9:
I fumbled my way down the dim halls searching for a room to enter. Why didn't I turn the light on?

Nice going again Frank.

My thoughts suddenly collided as one as I felt myself falling to the ground down several steps.

My head hit the ground with a thump, everything went silent except the faint footsteps running to me towards

me in the distance calling my name.

I felt like my heart had stopped.

The lights came on then everything went black. I couldn't keep my eyes open. I couldn't hold on.

Part 10:
I opened my eyes seeing the white walls around me, the smell I hated, hospital.
As my eyes slowly opened I heard someone jump from the other side of the room and pounce at me.
His arms slowly clenched on top me tightly.

'I thought I'd last you' he whispered in my ear.

'I'd never leave you' I said back. Neither of us wanted to let go.

I loved the way his hair felt on my skin, the soft touch of his own skin against mine, his smell.

'I got here as soon as I could' Mikey said rushing through the door. Why does he always come in at the wrong times?

'Get a room' he said to us laughing. Oh no, did Gerard tell him? He couldn't of, he wouldn't of.

I looked up at Gerard who backed away from me as his brother entered the room. I gave him a puzzled expression and he just shrugged. As I looked at him I began to worry. His skin was pale and his eyes were bloodshot. He'd been crying. What hit me most was that he'd been crying, over me.

'So, who wants coffee?' Mikey spoke.

'Coffee!' I yelled hoping he'd get the idea.
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Oh oh ohhhhhhhhh!! I shall shoot them if you so wish *loads special orange machine guns* Ready... XD Writing moreeee??
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*new readerrrrrrr*
i like this story!
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