jennyboo*

this is just a song i wrote not long ago when i was feeling really down. its basically about discovering that all my friends were fake in elementary school, and trying to deal with it. i thought i could share it with people on this site, because i feel like every one here understands me, not like the people i talk about in this song. so, constructive critisism please, but no insulting. i worked really hard on this, and i think its really good, but i really want to know what others think too. probably more to come as well! (NOTE: yes, i took the very first line of this song from Disenchanted, because thats my fav MCR song, so dont bitch at me for it!)

You Don't Know Me

It was a lie when they smiled,
and said they all loved me so.
It was the truth when they screamed,
and said "Your should just go!
We don't care where you run to,
as long as your away from here."

And then the tragedy began,
and the tears just ran down.
You'll never know what it's like
to always put on a frown.
Then my heart finally broke,
like nothing else could go wrong.

This life, isn't worth living.
This world, isn't big enough for my heart.

(Chorus)
It's your fault that you made me
jaded and heartachey,
and the awful tears that sting,
will cause a scar so deep.
But what stays in my mind,
and won't ever leave me...
is the picture of your faces.
Oh, you don;t know me like you once did.

Loneliness washes over my face.
Many don't understand forced smiles.
Nobody feels this stinging disgrace,
Oh, you never knew me all the while.
Happiness has disappeared,
this is everything I feared...

(Chorus)
It's your fault that you made me
jaded and heartachey,
and the awful tears that sting,
will cause a scar so deep.
But what stays in my mind,
and won't ever leave me...
is the picture of your faces.
Oh, you don;t know me like you once did.
(x2)

Everything was a lie,
your making me run and hide.
Everything was a lie,
what's the point of this damn life?
Oh, you don't know me anymore.

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MarieMistake

I really like it.

It reminds me so much of how I felt when I lived in Norway when I was younger. I can really relate.
It's really, really good :]

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jennyboo*

aww, thank you hun :D

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jayybee

jenny
this song is amzing!

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Keifer

I really like the way you write. It sounds like you put alot of time and emotion in this song. That's my favorite type.

jennyboo*

thank you both
and yes, i do put a lot of effort into them
i make sure it flows to the best of my ability
and that it truly shows how im feeling
that's the best kind of writing, in my eyes.

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thaktha0

Hm...I can see that U are alone among people. Don't cry, don't scream.
The sun will shine one day...
We will mend your heart. Hold my hands

(it's one of my poems. I wrote it in my darkest time. )

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I'm not special at all.

Cause I'm special. And everyone's special.

thaktha0

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I'm not special at all.

Cause I'm special. And everyone's special.

jennyboo*

it's awesome (y)

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XXXThanx4theVenomXXX

...That was amazing
It sounded really honest
It's good to see someone who feels that way expressing their feelings through writing, when so many don't...
I can really relate, I'm in a similar situation
You should be very proud

We're here for you, never forget that

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I'd tear out my eyes, the gift of sight,
If it meant that you could see the light

ILY G xox