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Old 09-18-2007, 10:10 PM   #1
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Something of nothing... Quick song i wrote..

Im not finding all the answers
But maybe ill find another way
to survive another day
because of all these different seaons of my life
but maybe i can figure things out, somehow

But now that ive been brokendown
dragged my head out of the clouds
walking round this town
but i have the time
for things to become fine, sometime

but things are falling down around me
what was so close now seems so far
seems everything ive ever loved has gone
why must they fade into the dark

so i walk along this broken road
gone too far to make it home
so i continue one my own
floating here all alone
but all will be fine, given time

but things are falling down around me
what was so close now seems so far
seems everything ive ever loved has gone
why must they fade into the dark
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Old 09-18-2007, 10:26 PM   #2
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:O!
Loved it.
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Old 09-18-2007, 11:46 PM   #3
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hey that was good! i liked it
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Old 09-18-2007, 11:51 PM   #4
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wow! i love it.
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Old 09-19-2007, 05:46 AM   #5
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Thanks guys for the feedback..
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i really like it. very cool. i wish i could write songs :P
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Old 09-20-2007, 07:00 AM   #7
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Thanky you... :-)
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Old 09-20-2007, 06:50 PM   #8
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Somthing new...

Misery loves company

with commintments which i cant commit to
i have to find the time to think
sitting around getting nothing done
but knowing it all, but how to make things right
no matter how much i want you here with me
it isnt going to happen as you aint got the patience
and i dont have the time
but i would burn this town down so you could see me
come to me and be mine

I want to find the time so i can see you
grabbing all the time i have to be with you
dont wanna forget how we are now
or to forget how your voice sounds
im sure i heard you say that you loved me
but misery loves my company

id pay aything for your thoughts
just to know where i stand
but with my shy confusion
i would never have the right words to hand
looking for the perfect way to say the simple things
while big issues are put aside
so as i have something to worry about later

I want to find the time so i can see you
grabbing all the time i have to be with you
dont wanna forget how we are now
or to forget how your voice sounds
im sure i heard you say that you loved me
but misery loves my company
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Again, I love it. Puure talent. <3
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Old 09-21-2007, 04:38 PM   #10
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Thank you... :-)
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