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Old 07-31-2007, 07:02 PM   #1
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Disenchanted.


Rating: 12+
Main Characters: Frank Iero/OFC
Disclaimer: I do not own, know or have any contact with any members of My Chemical Romance. I do own, or have permission to use the other characters who do in fact exist, and all others are fictional. This story is entirely fictional.

Chapter Index;
One - Here
Two - Pg 2
Three - Pg 3
Four and Five - Pg 4
Six and Seven - Pg 5
Eight - Pg 6
Nine - Pg 9
Ten - Pg 11
Eleven - Pg 12
Twelve - Pg 13
Thirteen - Pg 14
Fourteen - Pg 15
Fifteen - Pg 16
Sixteen - Pg 17
Seventeen and Eighteen - Pg 18
Nineteen - Pg 20
Twenty - Pg 21
Twenty One - Pg 22
Twenty Two - Pg 24
Twenty Three - Pg 27
Twenty Four - Pg 29
Twenty Five - Pg 30
Twenty Six - Pg 33
Twenty Seven - Pg 35
Twenty Eight - Pg 36
Twenty Nine - Pg 39
Thirty - Pg 41
Thirty One - Pg 43
Thirty Two - Pg 45
Thirty Three - Pg 46
Thirty Four - Pg 48
Thirty Five - Pg 50
Thirty Six - Pg 53
Thirty Seven - Pg 55
Thirty Eight - Pg 57
Thirty Nine - Pg 59
Forty - Pg 62
Forty One - Pg 64
Forty Two - Pg 68
Forty Three - Pg 71
Forty Four - Pg 75
Forty Five - Pg 80
Forty Six - Pg 82
Forty Seven - Pg 87
Forty Eight - Pg 92
Forty Nine - Pg 95
Fifty - Pg 102
Fifty One - Pg 113


One
I sat on the sidewalk with my head in my hands and let the salty tears run down my cheeks. I knew that my mascara and eyeliner would run but I didn't care. It was a cold September night in Belleville and I had just run away. Again. I just couldn't take my father anymore so that night I made the descision to hastily pack my bag and get out of the house as soon as I could. Since my mom died a month ago he had become distant and barely noticed he had two daughters anymore. I had nowhere to go, I had no friends, I'd only moved to New Jersey eight weeks ago and I was seen as a reject at school; that loner girl who listened to music all the time. I was the complete opposite to the preppy girls that were everything I loathed, personified.
So, with nowhere to go and no one to turn to, I roamed the streets for a few hours and ended up on the sidewalk, finally letting my emotions overcome me. I just missed her so much...
I was considering moving on from the spot when someone approached me. He was a short guy with messy black hair and piercings in his nose and lip, with the most amazing eyes I'd ever seen. I thought I recognised him but I wasn't sure. Of course, I looked terrible. My long brown hair was hanging around my face and I knew that my eyeliner had been messed up.
"Hey, are you okay? Only, I saw you from across the street and you don't look too good.." he asked and I could see the concern etched on his face.
"Yeah, I'm fine, thanks," I replied with a weak smile. I could tell from the look on his face that he didn't believe me and, if I were him, I wouldn't have either.
"Hmm...well, okay, if you insist..." he began to walk away but turned to me again, "do you wanna get a coffee with me?" he asked with a slight grin. He seemed like a nice guy so I heard myself agreeing to join him. I must be crazy, I thought, I don't even know this guy's name! Almost as if he was reading my mind, he offered his hand to help me up from my sitting position and smiled, "Oh by the way, I'm Frank, Frank Iero."
I took his hand and picked up my bag.
"Hayley Adler," I replied, returning his warm smile.

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Old 07-31-2007, 07:20 PM   #2
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Omg Shaz! I love it so far. You must continue!
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Old 07-31-2007, 07:22 PM   #3
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lol thanks Jo!
I'll keep posting if I get readers!!
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Old 07-31-2007, 07:25 PM   #4
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I could make you a banner, if you want? ^_^
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Old 07-31-2007, 07:26 PM   #5
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awww Jo ily!lol
that would be great! =]
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Old 07-31-2007, 07:28 PM   #6
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If you want, go to my banner page and tell me what colors and stuff so we can stop spamming your thread, LOL.
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Old 07-31-2007, 07:48 PM   #7
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oh, it sounds really good!
keep up with it!
I don't drink coffee but I definitely would go with Frankie if he invited me tolol
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i like the beginning.
can't wait for the next update! <33
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I've been staring at the computer screen for days, with out sleep waiting for an update! Naw, not really, but if you don't update soon, I might. I really like it, so UPDATEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!
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::new reader::

this is great!!
sounds interesting!
i'd like 2 see where it goes

can't wait for update
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