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Old 04-25-2007, 09:52 PM   #11
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I have an update written, but I'm debating on whether or not I should post it yet.
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10.29.07 -PARAMORE [NEWPORT MUSIC HALL]
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Old 04-25-2007, 10:16 PM   #12
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Uh, I suggest you post it!
Please?
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Old 04-25-2007, 10:37 PM   #13
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Uh, I suggest you post it!
Please?
i agree!!
dont debate, do it.lol

please
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Old 04-25-2007, 10:38 PM   #14
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PLEASE POST! [:
I really want to see what happens!
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Old 04-25-2007, 11:02 PM   #15
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OMG I love this story sooo much and I love Frerard...so cute ^_^
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Old 04-26-2007, 11:51 PM   #16
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Okay, Here's your update, because I love you all so much.
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CHAPTER FOUR:

GERARD'S P.O.V

I opened the door and walked into the room. He was laying in the bed, his back turned to me. He looked miserable. I sat on the bed beside him, touching his shoulder.

"Frank, I need to talk to you about something." I said to him.

"Gerard, if it's about that kiss, I said that I'm sorry." his back was still facing me.

"No, Frankie, don't apologize." I said. "Turn around and look at me."

He turned around to face me, his eyes were red, and it looked like he had been crying. I gasped. Am I hurting him that bad? I thought.

"Come on, sit up." I said softly, taking his hand and helping him up. I then took him in my arms. I hated seeing him looking so miserable. I especially hated that I caused it.

"Gerard, why...why are you being so gentle with me?" He asked.

I didn't say anything, I just sat there, holding him. He felt so warm, I loved having him in my arms and I didn't want to let go. He lifted his head off my shoulder and looked at me.

"Gerard?"

I looked into his eyes, deciding to make the first move. "Frankie, I love you."

"What?" He said, pulling away from me completely.

I looked at him. "I love you, I'm in love with you."

"I love you, too, but what about Olivia? You guys are in love."

I shook my head. "No, she's in love with me. Frank when you kissed me, I liked it. I felt more in that short kiss then I ever felt being with her."

I took him into my arms again.

"Gerard, I want to be with you." he said, resting his head on shoulder.

"I want to be with you too."

FRANKS P.O.V

I layed on his shoulder as he held me. I was so happy to be in his arms and to know that he wanted me as much as I wanted him. I love him, and now I know he loves me too. I decided that it was time for me to go further.

"Will you go out with me?" I blurted out.

He looked at me as I pulled my face away from his shoulder. At first I thought he was going to say no, I thought he was upset. Then, his face softened and he gave my body a gentle squeeze.

"Frankie, I love you. There is no doubt in my mind that I do. This may be kind of hard at first, but I am willing to make it work. So, yes, I will go out with you."

I smiled, finally happy to be with the man I have wanted since the day I met him. I kissed him, and instead of just sitting there like he had in the car that day, he kissed back.

When we finally pulled apart, I giggled a little.

"I love you, Gerard."

"I love you too, baby." He said to me, laying down and pulling me with him. My heart skipped a beat. He called me baby. Not Frank, not Frankie. Baby. I was so happy with him. I fell asleep in his arms that night, happy at last.
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Awh, That is so cute!
I loved it.
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:D cute!!!
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sweet!

(we love you to)
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AWWWWWWWWw that made me smile :D like that.
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April 14. The Best day of my LIFE.
Mikey Spit on me!
Frank smiled at me!
Front row right in front of Gerard and Mikey and Frank.
The whole show was AMAZING.
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