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Aww, don't give up on your talents. Your poetry is fantastic.
They are all really powerful and snappy, they're amazing 
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^ thanks hun
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07-29-2008, 04:33 PM
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Those are all so powerful and they are all fantastic.
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07-29-2008, 08:54 PM
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^thanks so much, means a lot.
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10-06-2008, 04:15 PM
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Except some poems to be posted soon!
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10-06-2008, 08:10 PM
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Yay! I'm glad.
I love your poems
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10-07-2008, 06:45 AM
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Your writting is amazing.
It's so, honest. You're very strong to post them publicly.
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10-07-2008, 04:18 PM
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Thank you. <3 Heres aother one from earlier in the year.
The rain threatens to fall from her eyes, Never does it succeed, Emotionless and empty, Anything but sane, Anything but happy, Anyone but herself, Crimson water drains from her veins, Through the self inflected wounds, No, not wounds;feelings, Ones unexplainable, Ones still masked, Now open by the blade, Secrets still kept beyond the surface of her skin, Constant sting of ones cuts lets her know she's alive, That this isn't all a terrible dream, Literaly dieing to awake from, Only to find that things will never change.
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10-09-2008, 02:24 AM
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Oh Sarah that was beautiful! Your detail is amazing; I could really feel the emotion.
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Wow, Sarah. That one was so intense.
I love how you can convey emotion so well
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