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Old 06-05-2008, 01:21 AM   #11
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Aw, I love your poems <3

And, yes, I agree. Most of my best are the old ones. Too bad I forgot where I put them

But, anyway, I hope you post more soon

And, I'm sorry, MaryFreakshow, but what does that video have to do with anything?
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Old 06-05-2008, 01:36 AM   #12
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Thank you guys so much!!! and yes mary, i agree, wtf at u? LMFAO xD
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Old 06-05-2008, 02:08 AM   #13
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^lol!

Loved the last poem, Sarah! But I'm glad you don't feel that way anymore. Beautiful, as always.
I know what you mean, Lexi! I told Sarah I'd post some of mine, but can't seem to find them! /offtopic
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i love these!!
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Thank you so much everyone! Heres another

Little girls are made of,
Sugar and spice and eveything nice,
Why is it that I am made of anger and sadness?
No sprinkles on me,
That the world can see,
I never imagined this would become of me
I bleed, I cry, I fight and I lie,
Is this what little girls are made of?
I smile on the outside but not on the in,
I was sent here from saten,
I was made from sin,
This isn't a world I was meant to be in.
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Old 06-05-2008, 06:26 PM   #16
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Wow...these are all so powerful, Sarah!
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This poem is personal. I was debating on posting it or not, but after all it is one of my better writings. So here ya go. This is sadly recent....Though I am trying to keep recovered. >.<

Dear cutting,
I've thought of you lately,
Longing for your atmosphere,
Your distraction against what has happened,
The desire strong and clear,
Haunting images of our past affairs,
Within my mind it's drawing fear,
I want to engage in you again,
But the deadly addiction already overcome,
I am scared to see you,
To go back too "then",
Hello cutting,
I ask you to please leave me alone,
I don't fancy your help,
I don't like your convincing tone.
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Old 06-07-2008, 05:03 PM   #18
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i love these! amazingg. i'm also recovering from the same problem, so I know how you feel. :\
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I loved those last two ones

I can definitely relate to the one in violet, and the one about cutting was very powerful.
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Thanks guys. and I can't believe its rated 5 stars! -hugs all- thanks so much! I'm not sure when i'll have more to though, im doubting my talent at the moment.
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